In this blog post, I will be discussing and sharing my final double-page spread. Many changes were made in the first draft. I used all of the constructive criticism I received in class to create my final double-page spread. I would say that the first draft is really different from the final, double-page spread because several changes needed to be made.
First draft of Double-Page Spread:
The first image on the first page of double page spread is in a polaroid frame with dull color
The quote is in a thick light pink outline
No name under the quote
Purple background
"Golf is a sport that has been around for over 600 years" The number in this sentence was changed in the final double-page spread.
Final Double-Page Spread:
The first image on the first page of double page spread is in a polaroid frame with a bright white color
The quote is in a thinner darker pink outline
Name is under the quote
Blue background
"Golf is a sport that has been around for over 400 years" The number in this sentence was changed from "600" to "400"
Similarities:
Same fonts
Same subheadings
Same images
Same pull quote
In conclusion, several changes were made to create the final double-page spread. The criticism helped me create the perfect double-page spread. I am very happy with the results because I think it looks more girly, and the layout looks better. I had difficulty changing the color of the Polaroid on the first page of the double-page spread. The issue was that I couldn’t change it to white directly from Canva so I had to edit the image on markup through the Apple camera roll. I did this by choosing another Polaroid template and coloring over it with white on my phone. With that being said, I am very happy with the result and in my eye the magazine is perfect.
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